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FTCD 2.1

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Previous <- :bulletyellow: This is Chapter 2, page 1 :bulletyellow: -> Next

Sorry for the slooowwwwww updates.
But it's finally here, another Fatality 8D

I did kinda cut off the last part of it, so those of you who think they remember more - you remember correctly, that's been shifted to the next part, however.

Note: The 20 is a resurrection roll. Since nobody's dead yet, it's pretty useless.
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Love the art and concept so far but, and this is just me, I can't stand the diction in this comic, and indeed that In Black and White as well, people don't tend to talk so perfectly in real life and it just comes off as unnatural, not to mention by having everyone talk the same way you are missing out on an important part of characterization.

The art and story telling are there now you just have to work on organic and differentiated dialogue.