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Don't be afraid to add to what I already did in the comments, but all I'll do is probably nod, nod and nod some more. I just put the tip of the iceberg into this thing, there are so many things wrong with my story.
I don't care though.
It's been a good ride and I've learned a lot. My "fame" that I had for a while was not my doing, and I know lots of people are disappointed, but hey. So am I.
I dedicate this to SABERinBLUE and Pitch-Black-Nuzlocke. Both critics which tried to awaken me way earlier. If I only had listened... I probably would have given up and spared all of you this terrifying terrible nuzlocke
Ah, whatever. I'm still proud of what I did. It just wasn't very good.
But as they say at my Uni: it's okay for something not to work out. You just need to realise why it didn't work out and think about what you could have done better... and then DO IT BETTER NEXT TIME!
And that's my goal now.
\o/ Wasserbienchen moves on from IBAW!
Normally I would say not to be so hard on yourself, but... this is all valid. I experienced pretty much all of the same frustrations while reading this, but I kept going despite that. Because it was still so engaging and immersive. I recognized that it didn't have to be perfect, and from an entertainment standpoint, this was alright. I am glad that you could take this as a learning experience. Best of luck to you, Wasser! Sending you virtual hugs.
I am still upset about the black pokeball subplot getting dropped.
But, maybe that is part of it. Like, even if things didn't pan out, all of your ideas were still so intriguing. Even if the plotpoints that I was excited to explore were dropped, the fact that they were brought up in the first place was enough for me.They piqued my interest and I am not sure if there is an answer, or if I even wanted an answer. It was to be expected that you wouldn't be able to find a nice neat ending, but the journey was still incredible regardless.
Besos y saludos.